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Masquerade by Chiruzame Masquerade by Chiruzame
Woots, Shidary's BC entry for the Masquerade ball INVASION! >8D
No, I don't know what is "perspective", "anatomy" and "logic". I have never heard of them before. *cries* This was rushed out inbetween uni works so like, I dunno, no energy to correct mistakes ;__;UU
Now of she'd just win Gold already I could try, I dunno, drawing some ELSE besides her all the time!??! :iconfinegeezplz:

Drop a vote if you like ;w;
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So, you didn't end up changing that hand, you probably should have ^^U mainly because she's wearing black gloves. I think you could have given her a bit more of a curve at the waist considering the way she's bending her upper body.
With the background and foreground added her pose suddenly seems a bit too 'posed' especially since she's standing there alone in a corner, I think it's mainly the way she's lifting her leg.
Can't decide if the foreground annoys me or if I'm fine with it, not sure what it is that could be annoying me about it - maybe it's because it doesn't have any lines while the rest of the image does? Well what I do know that annoys me about the background is the blurred bit on the left and I think it is because the blur is supposed to set it further into the back but the colours are too bright and saturated for that to really happen so it just ends up being distracting.
That all said I really like the outfit design and her weapon and even with little mistakes here and there the picture as a whole looks very good. :meow:
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Chiruzame Jan 2, 2013   General Artist
*Activates iron shield of didn't-have-time-and-energy* xPPP
Yeah I know I should've just made that smaller but I didn't xD
And yeah I had a stronger curve at the start but then corset and jacket softened it and I remembered I cant draw hips for the life of me and- no, I'm lying, I didn't really notice it disappearing xD but you're right, should be more accentuated...
LOLLLLL Yeaaaaah, I'm very aware of the posing-thing and I'm putting like, 65% of my energy into ignoring that at all times xDD But I liked the pose and wanted to do a BG but not a complicated one and... welp... yeah .__.U
The foreground had lines, until the blur attacked. Then it didn't anymore. But yeah, I can imagine that'd bother ya. It doesn't bother me honestly... I'd just have liked something in a middle plain between the foreground and her coz it seems like to big of a jump... :/
It's funny you bring up the colours-background thing coz I actually did think of that and tried it really lazily but thought it looked stupid and ignored ^^U I totes get your point though, yeah, granted, defs v_vU
Thanks for the crit! ;w; :hug:
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Giveortake Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful! I hope you win~
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Chiruzame Dec 29, 2012   General Artist
:hug: THANKS! I did Cx
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Giveortake Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome, congratulations!
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Chiruzame Jan 2, 2013   General Artist
Thanks!~
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Giveortake Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome~
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Jadified Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your vote has been cast for shidary

Coz uno, she's quite handsome!
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Chiruzame Dec 29, 2012   General Artist
Thank you!~ Hehehe, yes, handsome seems to fit her here Cx
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Le-Cafe Dec 21, 2012
WOW~
That is so beautiful~ ;A;
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