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With the background and foreground added her pose suddenly seems a bit too 'posed' especially since she's standing there alone in a corner, I think it's mainly the way she's lifting her leg.
Can't decide if the foreground annoys me or if I'm fine with it, not sure what it is that could be annoying me about it - maybe it's because it doesn't have any lines while the rest of the image does? Well what I do know that annoys me about the background is the blurred bit on the left and I think it is because the blur is supposed to set it further into the back but the colours are too bright and saturated for that to really happen so it just ends up being distracting.
That all said I really like the outfit design and her weapon and even with little mistakes here and there the picture as a whole looks very good.
Yeah I know I should've just made that smaller but I didn't xD
And yeah I had a stronger curve at the start but then corset and jacket softened it and I remembered I cant draw hips for the life of me and- no, I'm lying, I didn't really notice it disappearing xD but you're right, should be more accentuated...
LOLLLLL Yeaaaaah, I'm very aware of the posing-thing and I'm putting like, 65% of my energy into ignoring that at all times xDD But I liked the pose and wanted to do a BG but not a complicated one and... welp... yeah .__.U
The foreground had lines, until the blur attacked. Then it didn't anymore. But yeah, I can imagine that'd bother ya. It doesn't bother me honestly... I'd just have liked something in a middle plain between the foreground and her coz it seems like to big of a jump... :/
It's funny you bring up the colours-background thing coz I actually did think of that and tried it really lazily but thought it looked stupid and ignored ^^U I totes get your point though, yeah, granted, defs v_vU
Thanks for the crit! ;w;
Coz uno, she's quite handsome!
That is so beautiful~ ;A;